Life Expectation For Wegeners HELPPPPPPPPPPPP WITH ENGLISH?

HELPPPPPPPPPPPP WITH ENGLISH? - life expectation for wegeners

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Zac is one of many students whose lives have changed a lot from Dewey.
When you come to a decision that Zac had absolutely no control over, even if it contradicts his own view, which is obviously the result of very low, with the trust allows you to do so. This was mainly because of his authoritarian father, who had a great influence and power in him, education and recreation. The high expectations of parents also had an impact on the appearance and behavior of Zac, leading to a very stiff and uncomfortable seem to smile and never led. But Zac personality and appearance changes with the arrival of Dewey. Evi is visibleDent when Zac smiled for the first time and played with an electric guitar, which has banned from his strict father. It displays a very comfortable from the start. That is why Zac has only spiritually but also physically against Dewey changed changed.